The idea of this fanfic is nice and the grammar is already good, but the main problem I have regarding this fanfic is that the Mc is too afraid of the butterfly effect. Like, we get it, knowing the future will come in handy, but the way MC keeps tryibg to avoid changing the plot makes the story seem uninteresting. After all, why read a fanfic when nothing in the plot will change? Even if the author is planning to change the plot in the future, by that time i’m pretty sure many readers would already be tired of The story, me included.
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