▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ - not really 5☆, but I will give 5☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ - to tell you the truth, I would rate it 3.7☆. the start of the story is a bit weird. how was she able to escape that easy. Well I hope you can improve the story more. ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆☆ - Physical design is 5☆. I hope you can give us more information regarding her abilities. - a bit disappointed about veldora's sword, the fact that you didn't name it veldora is a bit disappointing. also nurffing it to the point it's just feels like just top10 sword in onepiece. (I didn't mind the nurffing it but isn't it a bit to much?)(I'm not going to give the details how strong veldora's should be, because you have already read the wn.) ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆
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