Review Detail of Sorria in dropped

I will be completely honest with you author, the idea of the history is good, your grammar, on the other hand, is horrible, you constantly make the same simple mistakes and somehow you still don't capitalize EVERY first word on the paragraph, like seriously? this is the dumbest mistake someone can make, kids know not to do that I'm not roasting you or even trying to be rude but author, go study some English before writing something.