Review Detail of Zepher_Catch in Transmigrated as a Ghost
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I got to chapter 39 before I had to drop this, writing quality isn't poor but it is close. To give an inference, the first person perspective is so bland it sounds like 3rd person. Fights are short and most parts skipped until tables are turned. Characters aren't fleshed out, story is forced, there is little detail about the world, and to world is also meh.
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Zepher_CatchLv13Zepher_Catch
Oh, you have my attention. Which part gets better? Because this does have potential I thought it squandered it but if it didnt... it is worth the read.
THE_SAVAGE_KITTY:it gets much better
THE_SAVAGE_KITTYLv14THE_SAVAGE_KITTY
Zepher_Catch:Oh, you have my attention. Which part gets better? Because this does have potential I thought it squandered it but if it didnt... it is worth the read.
Zepher_CatchLv13Zepher_Catch
Thx bro, at least it is worth it. What about writing quality, does first person still sound like third person?
THE_SAVAGE_KITTY:well after like chapter 50 or 100 theirs barely any if at all grammar mistakes
THE_SAVAGE_KITTYLv14THE_SAVAGE_KITTY
honestly no idea not really at chapter 900 and up but I haven't read the earlier chapters in a long while
Zepher_Catch:Thx bro, at least it is worth it. What about writing quality, does first person still sound like third person?