Updated from my previous review now that I’ve read all the free chapters. The grammar doesn’t get any better. There are “paragraphs” of just run on sentences. The author definitely needs an editor. Now that the Gender Bender is a permenate thing, Marcus just coasts through being a girl like nothing is different at all. There’s a modicum of it when he has to learn how to wear underwear and a dress, but mostly it’ background until he offends someone and they’re pissed off he’s a girl.
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