Review Detail of D0nk3yK0ng in Transmigrated as a Ghost

Just started, but it needs to be said that the grammar is terrible. The fisst 3 chapters have been edited, but they still read awkwardly. Too many commas and run ons. Like they had a bunch of run ons in the first place and tried to fix it by adding commas in weird places instead of rewriting the sentences. I do enjoy the use of the Oxford comma though, it is nice when they list various things and has it there.