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I have read 41 chapters. The character development is average albeit forced and unfulfilling. The character itself is nice and him not wanting to kill is understandable and relatable until later on you realize how he puts his problems at the back of his mind and ignores problems around him which makes him unbearable. He likes to overestimate himself and he has no plan b. He weirdly enough whines later on about the cruelty of the world because he made a half baked plan that goes haywire instead of doing that earlier which just makes me distance from him rather than sympathizing with him. The story is good until the part where he hesitated to kill. It would have been nice to see him think about it more but he brushed it off so quickly. After that it seemed like the author might have been in pressured cause the way he finally kills someone is frustrating. Then the weird power boost which limited his POSSESSION. The chapters when he hesitated to kill and when he gained a message from admin were a mess. The admin message seems more like the author sending a message to the readers. I honestly thought this would be a more ghost focused novel but nah it isn't. The character development is average The story development is below average. Everything else is 5 star Sorry for such a low review.

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