After writing 300 chapters I figured it was time for my shameless author review. The beginning starts off fairly slow, and the MC is not blessed with world breaking powers from the start, and gets through everything like a breeze. So if you were looking for an MC that is perfect with no flaws and always does everything right this is not the story for you. Also, the MC is able to take multiple forms through the story and spends some of it in the form of a girl. If that is a deal breaker for you, sorry but this is my story and I already wrote it. Now if none of these things bother you, than I personally like the story and think it is worth a read. It is full of plenty of action, adventurer, fun times, and even a bit of romance later on in the story. Lastly, if you enjoy the story, thank you for reading, I never thought it would come this far.
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LIKEPurpleMuse:Ik this is a strange thing to comment on a review, but is there a way to add a new tag called “WORLD SYSTEM”. I only ask this because I prefer there being a general system that people use that the MC takes advantage of compared to a completely random system.
I got a question. Are you from Czech republic or do you speak czech language? Or other slavic country? Because First!! one character from the begining is named Mrazivý Borealia, Mrazivý means frosty or freezing in czech. Second!! Spirit Voda, Voda in czech means water and she is using water magic in chapter 65 at the end. i would like you to answer. thx děkuji
Personally i havent even read the story but the biggest flaw i see in it is calling thr MC a ghost when he does nothing ghostly nor take any of the advantages a ghost would give. Instead hes immediately inside a girls body and then shackled by her spirit. It may have been acceptable if it was only for a couple dozen chapters at most but instead he is bound to the body for hundreds of chapters. Thats just not good writing, completely has nothing to do with the expectations set by the synopsis. If anything it completely goes against it.