The plot is good, the characters are sometimes monotone, but otherwise not bad, the mc is strong but not op so a good start, but man, the english and grammar is really really hard to read and sometimes doesn't make sense but overall not a bad read
BlackSwordman1234
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LIKEits ok dude just try your best, i would recommend a proof reader or apps that correct grammar, like grammarly
BlackSwordman1234:Sorry about the grammar and stuff. I try my best, but grammer and spelling has always been my weakest link.