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[Reviewed on: 12-10-2021] [Reading status: 11 chapters] ● Strength: - A considerate and 'everyone's loved' sister and daughter FL is waiting for you to be saved. Well, she's not exactly a white lotus since I'm betting on her strong personality (she listens to her heart and observes things) I think and I believe she will use her brain too I near future. - The plotline is hate-to-love relationship, however the tension of the atmosphere which the author has created can be imagined effortlessly. - The major strong factor is the emphasis on every character's emotions and thoughts. Benjamin is protective, while the parents are mysterious yet trying their best to keep the daughter safe. Apart from Silja, the rest characters revolving around her are also fully developed, even her maid. - The reader gets immersed in the tension created from chapter 3 and can predict the potential plotline but I'm counting on the author for deviation. (ps, the title of the work) - What caught my attention was the chapter one and mirror, owff~ - The male lead is your renowned playboy, abusive, probably torn emotionally and gives a 'fix me' vibe. But let's hope the fl wwil not bow down to him. - Despite English being author's 3rd language the narration is highly readable. ● Weakness: - There's no distinction between the notes & chapter content in 6th 6nd 8th chapter, which caused confusion and disrupts the flow. [Overall remarks: Conspiracy filled romance with round characters. Except supernatural and action. Serious tone and requires focus.]

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Mistress Of Enchanting Dragon

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Dream_blue98
Dream_blue98AuthorDream_blue98

Thank you so much for the review and for pointing out the mistakes. I will edit the mistake in notes soon.,🙃🙃

liyidevi
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hi author, can you confirm if the ml is really a Playboy and sleep around? is he not loyal to her and has other women?

Dream_blue98:Thank you so much for the review and for pointing out the mistakes. I will edit the mistake in notes soon.,🙃🙃
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Dream_blue98
Dream_blue98AuthorDream_blue98

Before her he had many women but after her he will be loyal to her. 😌

liyidevi:hi author, can you confirm if the ml is really a Playboy and sleep around? is he not loyal to her and has other women?
liyidevi
liyideviLv3liyidevi

oh okay, i usually do not like fl pure and ml Playboy kind of stories. not my cup of tea. but wish you good luck dear. thank you for the reply.

Dream_blue98:Before her he had many women but after her he will be loyal to her. 😌
Dream_blue98
Dream_blue98AuthorDream_blue98

Okay. But I wish you can give it a try. because the main focus of the story is not revolving around her purity but the the misturies powers and conspiracies going on around them.🙂🙂

liyidevi:oh okay, i usually do not like fl pure and ml Playboy kind of stories. not my cup of tea. but wish you good luck dear. thank you for the reply.
liyidevi
liyideviLv3liyidevi

hi, i know these things are not main focus for novels. like I said, I am not comfortable about certain elements as a woman. not just men, for me women also deserve best. these things do not exist in the real world, I at least want to read novels which treat women equally the least or partial to the best.... lol.... it's just a reading preference.

Dream_blue98:Okay. But I wish you can give it a try. because the main focus of the story is not revolving around her purity but the the misturies powers and conspiracies going on around them.🙂🙂
Dream_blue98
Dream_blue98AuthorDream_blue98

No worries. If that's your preference i can recommend a book. "Typhoon's dangerous wife" By Tanu_sam. no Casanova ml and with good plot and quite a intresting read.🙂

liyidevi:hi, i know these things are not main focus for novels. like I said, I am not comfortable about certain elements as a woman. not just men, for me women also deserve best. these things do not exist in the real world, I at least want to read novels which treat women equally the least or partial to the best.... lol.... it's just a reading preference.
liyidevi
liyideviLv3liyidevi

thank you very much dear 🥰🥰. i will check it out. i am sucker for romantic novels

Dream_blue98:No worries. If that's your preference i can recommend a book. "Typhoon's dangerous wife" By Tanu_sam. no Casanova ml and with good plot and quite a intresting read.🙂