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Safri_Rizal
Safri_RizalLv13yr
2021-11-17 20:02

hahhh, good writing but a lot of plothole like is it just to use chakra paper to check affinity because what i know swift release is come from lightning+wind affinity and many more plotholes

Reincarnated in Naruto, Yeah Naruto

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Kurosawa_Taiki
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Thanks for the review. I'll try to improve 馃槄

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The few chapters, The grammar was a little whacky, And some word's are missing, But eventually it gets better so good job, Your updates in chapters are very fast, But that will affect your grammar mistakes, So i recommend atleast slowing it down, The MC itself is pretty nice, I enjoy reading this so far

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