Review Detail of Mattirro in Life Drain System

well where to begin. let's start with the good. the story and idea are a little unique compared to other system stories up to chapter 13. my main complaint about this one that is really holding it back for me, is that the author is writing like someone with ADHD or ADD. what would be a few chapters in normal books is a few paragraphs that is immediately shoved aside the second the next point appears on the horizon. it really ruins the flo of reading .