An entertaining story overall. However, the grammer is a bit lacking. At least the right pronouns are used. A lot of novels that are translated mix up the he, her, she, and him pronouns, making me wonder if the person is a hermaphrodite. At least, so far, I haven't encountered this problem in this novel yet. If you don't mind the grammatical errors of using the wrong tense, which are the majority of the mistakes, you might enjoy this fantasy novel.
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