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yohananmikhael
yohananmikhaelLv32yryohananmikhael

I was checking some novel for material collecting for my reincarnation novel but I found something in this. Rather than being a novel, it feels like a play. Well, it's your style but it doesn't fit in the norm, which I pretty like to inform you. It has a little confusing plot and back story. I have no idea of what I am reading. Please if you do take this review into account, could you make it into more narrative form than dialogue or something. I am interested in the title but the structure fails me. Maybe the future reader might feel like that too. Hope this is useful.

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The Rebirth of Ancient Gods

Ibrahim_Daud_2168

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Ibrahim_Daud_2168
Ibrahim_Daud_2168AuthorIbrahim_Daud_2168

thanks for your advice if you want the stories to improve I can send you my discord link and we can talk more about it if you like

yohananmikhael:Sorry if it seems failing for you, it's an honest review to help you. Collect more materials to improve your writing.
yohananmikhael
yohananmikhaelLv3yohananmikhael

Sorry if it seems failing for you, it's an honest review to help you. Collect more materials to improve your writing.

Ibrahim_Daud_2168
Ibrahim_Daud_2168AuthorIbrahim_Daud_2168

thanks i will fix that

yohananmikhael:Sorry if it seems failing for you, it's an honest review to help you. Collect more materials to improve your writing.