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yohananmikhael
yohananmikhaelLv32yryohananmikhael

I was checking some novel for material collecting for my reincarnation novel but I found something in this. Rather than being a novel, it feels like a play. Well, it's your style but it doesn't fit in the norm, which I pretty like to inform you. It has a little confusing plot and back story. I have no idea of what I am reading. Please if you do take this review into account, could you make it into more narrative form than dialogue or something. I am interested in the title but the structure fails me. Maybe the future reader might feel like that too. Hope this is useful.

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The Rebirth of Ancient Gods

Ibrahim_Daud_2168

Liked it!

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yohananmikhael
yohananmikhaelLv3yohananmikhael

Sorry if it seems failing for you, it's an honest review to help you. Collect more materials to improve your writing.

Ibrahim_Daud_2168
Ibrahim_Daud_2168AuthorIbrahim_Daud_2168

thanks i will fix that

yohananmikhael:Sorry if it seems failing for you, it's an honest review to help you. Collect more materials to improve your writing.
Ibrahim_Daud_2168
Ibrahim_Daud_2168AuthorIbrahim_Daud_2168

thanks for your advice if you want the stories to improve I can send you my discord link and we can talk more about it if you like

yohananmikhael:Sorry if it seems failing for you, it's an honest review to help you. Collect more materials to improve your writing.