Review Detail of helixio in System Only Gives Me Useless Gifts (Old)

don't be fooled by the general title this story is really good. I'm just going to say that for the moment the author has managed not to dwell too much on the MC's time (we don't have 10,000 chapters in a day). There are a few spelling mistakes (but seeing as this is a story written by an amateur I don't ask too much).