Review Detail of SHIVAM_Chouksey in Snake Evolution System [ Legend Of Hebi]

Item: Snake Evolution System [ Legend Of Hebi]
Rating: 5

Review detail

SHIVAM_ChoukseyAuthor2yrSHIVAM_Chouksey

HI, Author here! Shamelessly reviewing his work the second time after completing one month. Of course, I rated it for 5. But if you have free time and nothing to do, try to peek and read in this novel. Maybe what you’re looking for is here. [img=recommend] The greatness of this novel cannot be found in the early chapter. Every character in this novel is 4d😉. So try and see. Then don’t forget to leave a review. And if you are more than generous, I will be happy and be more motivated if you can drop some power stones or send gifts. BIG THANKS FOR READING!!

Snake Evolution System [ Legend Of Hebi]

SHIVAM_Chouksey

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The_StartersLv1The_Starters

hii bhai... I like u r story, and it's fun to read except for few mistakes. it's awesome. just don't make the harem too big just few are enough. baki sab theek hai... good luck👍👍😃

2yr

Sleeping_Fox_UwULv4Sleeping_Fox_UwU

Well good point there... but the main if not the most important thing is there's so many mistakes and issues that make is hard to enjoy wholesomely... don't know how you will tale this criticism but yea it is what it is ... don't just fork ou chapters all the time but take your time to reread and fix the chapters before update... i just read the early chapters and there's a lot of mistakes , with speeches paragraphs genders and a lot of simple stuff which actually not seem much but ultimately is ver disturbing... hope you fix that... that will make it more enjoyable... don't know how you'll take this but hope for better no !?? 😁😁

2yr

Ex_Edge_Lord_Lv4Ex_Edge_Lord_

Indian writer?! Bhai tu pehla esa writer hai jo mujhe indian mila hai😃

2yr

SHIVAM_ChoukseyAuthorSHIVAM_Chouksey

sahi h bhai

Ex_Edge_Lord_:Indian writer?! Bhai tu pehla esa writer hai jo mujhe indian mila hai😃
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2yr

Dpress_LawLv15Dpress_Law

you dont plan 2 drop the novel unannounced later on or atleast with notice later.

2yr

Nambi_Rajan_5205Lv13Nambi_Rajan_5205

what about the book it isn't releasing any new chapters

2yr

purushottam_meherLv1purushottam_meher

finally a fellow Indian writer , bro one advice:- plz try to integrate some of our indian concepts in your novel . we have chinese , japanese , American but not a single Indian concept 😀😀😀

2yr