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Ramy_05
Ramy_05Lv13yr
2021-08-31 03:59

I write a review through a translator. I have read 3 volumes, but in Russian. On ficbook. In fact, I really liked this fic and I consider it one of the best that I have read. For English-speaking guys, judging by the comments in the chapters, the grammar is very lousy. This is most likely due to the fact that the Author wrote through a translator. SO BE CAREFUL, my English-speaking friend!!!!

DC: Strongest Gamer

DaoistC3PZue
4.7
178 Chs

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LordPuska
LordPuskaLv1

Ага, согласен с тобой, порой сложно понять , то что перевёл через переводчик. Иногда даже кажется как будто ты читаешь какие романы уся

3yr
7
Aleks_Shu_RUS
Aleks_Shu_RUSLv3

Можно ссылку на фикбук?

3yr
1
Aleks_Shu_RUS
Aleks_Shu_RUSLv3

Уже не надо) по первой главе понял что за фик) если что ищите автора Alex31

3yr
3
ZhangLongDong
ZhangLongDongLv3

what's the original titlw my friend?

2yr
1
Ramy_05
Ramy_05Lv1

Игрок DC: Крутой легавый

ZhangLongDong:what's the original titlw my friend?
2yr
3
Soel_Eater
Soel_EaterLv4

is these dropped ?

1yr
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Endless_Evolution2
Endless_Evolution2Lv4

i like this fanfic , and i still can enjoy it because i have walk in dao of MLT which more worst than this fanfic where the name of characters became liu , xia , luo , ect

3yr

kunichan
kunichanLv4

first of all i like the story. it took me back to memory lane of me being a practitioner of MTL Sect. sadly i already secluded myself since i found out some translation nowadays keeps getting horrible and hard to understand . the last mtl novel i read is my wife is a ceo . anyway story is great character design is great especially the joker . world background is ok and i look forward seeing more of the dc universe. my only complaint is the writing quality due to mtl like english. i hope the author take sometime to learn english or ask one of his readers to be an editor. he can use also some translator all like grammarly premium. you can find a hack premiim for free in the internet. anyway keep up the good work author

3yr
wael_korshome
wael_korshomeLv4

thanks for the good work and good luck😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

3yr
KingOfDragon
KingOfDragonLv3

Es mucho mejor de lo esperado, me gusta bastante el personaje le da un toque divertido tanto como juguetón a la historia, la historia no va muy rápida ni muy lenta fondo el tiempo para aclimatarse a esta. Espero con hacías la actualización.

3yr
Daoist4g4Z2O
Daoist4g4Z2OLv4

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Daoist571053
Daoist571053Lv3

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3yr
Tim_QQQ
Tim_QQQLv1

the writing quality is trash idk how its got such high reviews. the first line of the story (close to first line) was "gender - male, of course, i dont wanna be a homosexual" this was in reference to his gender selection. honestly i dont think the author knows what a homosexual is but i honestly am just gonna assume this is MTL trash

11mth
hacky999
hacky999Lv4

pleas can't you at least edit it so I won't lose my brain cells when reading it. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

3yr
Lackada1sical
Lackada1sicalLv4

I had given this fanfic a good review as it is really good, the plot, character, cliche and the not so good grammar but I won't blame Author-san as he is still at the stage of improving his English vocab, just keep on practicing and I do hope that some editors out there proof read this FF and forward the corrections to author-san as it would be a great help to him.

3yr
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