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It can be really good story i like woman mc hp stories but story writed so pure no evil character only voldemort and his slaves when you see some one first time you dont call he/she with their name or like talk best friends when he talk harry first time she talk like best friends so many plot missing and im not fan of evil mc but i dont like mc I will read story but please do not make love intrest with draco lol