Review Detail of EmpressChan in The Amazing Process For Marrying You

I'm writing this review based on the 20 chapters that I've read. This story has got potential. The plot ia good and the dynamics of the characters.However, the wrong construction of the sentences and grammar is messing up the reading experience. I am not a native English speaker so I'm still able to follow what's going on. I hope that the author will work on this. It will surely help increase the numbers of your readers.