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Honestly, the story is good. Though there are 7 chapters so far, the author dives really deep into the main character and tries to make him relatable. The writing quality is fairly good with a few structural mistakes here and there. (rather than structural mistakes it's more like the author could've used a better choice of words) still, I shall give him 5 stars. Also because the story is relatively short (7 chaps) I am willing to believe in the author and give him 5 stars. It's looking promising so far, and because of the small amounts of chap, I can't really give it anything less than 5 as character dev, world-building doesn't just get built in a few chapters. The only thing that prevents me from giving this a full 5 stars is the stability of updates which is like once a week. I can only give it 4 stars as of now. Keep up the good work

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Thank you very much for your honest review.