Really good story and i really liked it at the beginning but after having to wait for new chapters the story started dying down for me and it felt more like a chore to read it for me personally. The main reason is because how forced it all seems in the latest chapters. For example, he joined the team that both nash and silver were in and at the same time Alexandra was also coaching(this by itself is impossible because alexandra stated she never coached anyone but kagami and the other dude). This just seemed too unrnealistic of a coincidence to me. Also, kobe was somehow at a middle school practice game because the dean invited him.. Yeah right, a dean would invite a NBA player to their school to show them their basketball teams first ever match for no reason but to show them.. doesnt make sense. What makes even less sense is how Kobe stayed afterwards to give tips to the MC... A celebrity like Kobe would literally not have the time to stay afterwards just to watch a kid practice playing basketball.. But it was a pretty good story, just not for me. Keep it up author
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For the Kobe part, he literally complemented the mc for being the most talented kid he has ever seen. Surely, someone like Kobe will not waste that opportunity and help the "random kid". As for the invitation, the main excuse for that it's a school for rich kids. Surely it's not like the dean is lacking in any funds to afford an NBA star to watch their game. There's also a reason behind that in the next chapter For the Alexandra coaching them part, it's her first time there and the reason behind her coaching is to be revealed in later chapters. Anyways much love to u for still checking out my story
