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cutekittensmeow
cutekittensmeowLv122yr
2022-05-31 07:30

The writing is pretty good. The story is a mess. The MC starts off capable and independent, but the second they meet the ML they get dumber and dumber. The MC, a crossdressing man, tries to fake a royal pregnancy. A 10 year old would know that lie is going to fall apart immediately. The MC also becomes little more than a punching bag for the ML, becoming the end stages of an abusive relationship the first time the ML hurts them. It's hard to explain.

The Beauty And The Beast

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Shianne_De_Kock
Shianne_De_KockLv1

Read all current chapters! Firstly great synopsis, the story is well written and the idea is so orginal! I loved it [img=recommend] I can't wait to discover how the story unfolds! [img=exp][img=recommend][img=update]

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Justkeepsmiling
JustkeepsmilingLv1

The story starts of with a bang, throwing you right in the main characters situation. It;s a ltitle confusing at first, but thats just how the MC feels being tranmirgrated to a new world. Sicne the story is written in frist perosn, it feels liek you can imagine yourself as the cahrecter a lot more. My only dislike was use of the word I too much, but in the later chapters this changes

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limli949
limli949Lv15

I’m always on the look out for good trAnsmigration stories And I have a soft Spot for beastmen/world genre. No obVious grammatical error. I can’t waIt for further cHapters and i hope author doesn’t aBandon the story. Keep Up the good work !

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Kazmicink
KazmicinkLv1

Exciting! Poor Lara and her misadventures. It’s really interesting what she is going through. Now we all know it’s great to be a female, but yes it has its challenges lol. Highly recommended!

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mcross_1005
mcross_1005Lv2

Intriguing storyline! This is only the beginning but, I can say this is a fun-story. Wts more, it's Gender-bender! As a fan of it, I'm so in love with the plot. The author leads the events in a correct momentum, making u want more and more. Exciting to read more of MC's adventures !

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Bride_Maggie
Bride_MaggieLv12

I'll like to say i felt a myriad of emotions while reading this. Landon's character from the beginning almost sent me off. He was bold enough to frame the prince but too whimpy to stand for himself later on?!!! I get that he fell in love with the prince but I don't see the need of going through all the abuse in the prince's hand. I get it. The prince got angry because he was cheated upon but it was mentioned in a chapter that nothing caught him off guard and apparently he had been aware of Landon's presence in his room. I hated Landon's character but I couldn't bring myself to stop. I must commend the author for that. The novel is bitter sweet and I've got to say Landon is one of the most miserable MC's I've seen. Everyone misunderstands him and he somehow is always at fault!. I get it that he evoked some of the prince's bad memory but surely he didn't deserve a hand through his chest. I couldn't help but feel that the author was trying to.make Landon look selfish. Because he was pretty much blamed for always being a victim. He was taken advantage of because he was desperate , which he had all right to be. There's no way for him not to feel insecure when his lover or husband behaves so intimately with someone else. Throughout the whole novel I had found myself hoping he'll develop a backbone. Leave behind the ungrateful family of his because so far they have never tried to understand him once. He's always the one to take the black pot. I just hope the author will make him snap , I beg you. So far all the other characters who wanted to seek revenge due to their heart being broken haven't once moved my heart. The only one who has my pity is Landon. I might sound bias but that's how things are. But I've gotta admit that the author did a good job in developing the story. The plot became more intriguing and the writing improved tremendously. And even though sly seems yt have taken the dark road , I enjoy having him paired together with Theo and Landon. But author I'm begging you my poor heart has been abused so much. Make Landon stand for himself. I want to see those guys beg for his forgiveness.

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kathleenneko
kathleennekoLv3

Job well done Author! The synopsis itself already got my curiosity on how will the story go. And as read further and further the more I am falling for this novel. The narration and pace of the story was very well written also the exchange of dialogues of each character was smooth and easy to follow. I excited to read more and further. Its a great book to read.

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SF_Writes
SF_WritesLv3

Wow. This is so awesome. The synopsis itself is so catchy. Can't wait to see if Lady Lara gets caught or not. Keep up the good work author. Keep updating.

3yr
26stars
26starsLv12

There are only four chapters so far, but I can see great potential in his writing. The paragraphs are neat and well written, the dialogues are smooth and clear. I didn't find a major error when I read it. I'll look forward to the next chapters! 😊😇😇😇

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