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Leon_KingraphLv33yr
2021-05-31 19:55

This is amazing! Only a few chapters and it is already so exciting! I like all these creatures who surround the main character and I like the adventure which is ahead of him. I read all first chapters and to be honest, this novel is really interesting. Now, I am wondering about what will happen next.

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Bride_Maggie
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I'll like to say i felt a myriad of emotions while reading this. Landon's character from the beginning almost sent me off. He was bold enough to frame the prince but too whimpy to stand for himself later on?!!! I get that he fell in love with the prince but I don't see the need of going through all the abuse in the prince's hand. I get it. The prince got angry because he was cheated upon but it was mentioned in a chapter that nothing caught him off guard and apparently he had been aware of Landon's presence in his room. I hated Landon's character but I couldn't bring myself to stop. I must commend the author for that. The novel is bitter sweet and I've got to say Landon is one of the most miserable MC's I've seen. Everyone misunderstands him and he somehow is always at fault!. I get it that he evoked some of the prince's bad memory but surely he didn't deserve a hand through his chest. I couldn't help but feel that the author was trying to.make Landon look selfish. Because he was pretty much blamed for always being a victim. He was taken advantage of because he was desperate , which he had all right to be. There's no way for him not to feel insecure when his lover or husband behaves so intimately with someone else. Throughout the whole novel I had found myself hoping he'll develop a backbone. Leave behind the ungrateful family of his because so far they have never tried to understand him once. He's always the one to take the black pot. I just hope the author will make him snap , I beg you. So far all the other characters who wanted to seek revenge due to their heart being broken haven't once moved my heart. The only one who has my pity is Landon. I might sound bias but that's how things are. But I've gotta admit that the author did a good job in developing the story. The plot became more intriguing and the writing improved tremendously. And even though sly seems yt have taken the dark road , I enjoy having him paired together with Theo and Landon. But author I'm begging you my poor heart has been abused so much. Make Landon stand for himself. I want to see those guys beg for his forgiveness.

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