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kashish_gambhir
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this writer has come a long way since writing her first book - a better overall sentence structure and a complexer plot and characters, and the most important, chapter lenght!!😂 but she still has miles to go.i can definitely see a potential for improving some choice of words here and there and the fast paced-ness of the book. but your thought process steals the show! 'dad ran away with an adult star' loll who would've thought, it genuinely made me crack up (even though it wasn't intentional :p) keep up the good work, can't wait to know what lies ahead of yohanna⚡.

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theoceanbliss
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Yeah that's me! 😂

Ketan_Verma_7404
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She is a good writer and she can do much better ❤️the book structure and story is good overall but somehow her thoughts are naughtiest "dad run with a adult star"imagination 😂to an another level i also write blogs but my imagination is just a bit of nut and her is whole bulk of nut