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Tsukasa_Lv13yr
2021-06-01 15:34

The story's pretty interesting. The plot is graspable. But the writing could be better. I noticed a few grammatical mistakes that can be easily be fixed by sheer editing. This novel indeed has potential. I shall await your improvement.

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