This book is so good that I had to take my time to read it because it's intriguing. I love your writing style and the character design was nice Your introductory chapter was ok. Good luck author.

Let me start by saying I don't like this topic and these are not my type of stories at all. However, the writing and stability of updates seems solid with this story. The character development and world background is legit. The story development is also solid. The action sequences seem solid overall. I always think there could be a bit more description in stories that I'm reading. I think there were some parts where the grammar was off when it came to punctuation. I also don't like the idea of anyone dating anything occultic, but that's more of a personal view.

This a very enjoyable read! I liked the way Author have described the scenes with a really great detailing to the environment. And thanks for the song recommendations you gave in the chapters! There aren't many errors that makes this a really pleasant reading experience. Keep up the good work :)

Wonderful story! I was totally drawn into this world. It is an incredible tale to read. Sometimes I totally fall for Lord Clover and even felt like I was in the story. The novel is just so good :)

Hello dear author. This story is quite intriguing. There is not much grammatical errors which makes it a good read. The world background is good. The only errors I noted is when you are talking about the demon Lord clover. Instead of using His/ He/ him, you are using they as if there isore than one demon Lord. I thought maybe it could be the interference of your mother tongue, that's if you're not English. Apart from that, nothing is wrong

I'll give you my honest opinion, this is the first LGBT novel I read, the construction of the world is good, it shows that there is still a lot to be discovered and explored in the story, the personalities of both the Demon lord and Ace are well defined too. Overall this is a good novel, I hope the author will continue to be creative with the plot.

Well tbh I listen to the YT link first before I read this book lol. The settings was well created, maybe I recommend to add more characters to the story. I am expecting development of plot in the next few chapters. so far so good. thanks author. good job

Hum, as the book was about demons. It was well written and the author knows what he is doing with each character. Even though the first chapter has a bit of an information dump, it's good nevertheless.

I like the idea of the book. Like a DEMON! It is pretty interesting and the story development and charcters are good too. Totally worth a read! But I spotted some gramatical errors though there weren't too much. Great job author!