Review Detail of Deaboro in The Sealed Power
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Hi there this is going to be my first review. I have read up to about chapter 15 and this is what i have to say: +Fast paced for the ammount of how much the author writes (chapters are very short compared to any other book you can find on this site) +very i repeat VERY bad grammar and wording. Its to the point that i have to focus hard to understand anything that the author writes + I also belive that the author deletes all his bad comments becouse the book is imposible to read, no comments on any chapter and it only has positive reviews in the review section.
The Sealed Power
Dream_catch
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Hi Deaboro, Thank you for your review. I appreciate it, and I won't delete it or any other reviews that critique my work. I learned English on my own, and the Sealed Power was my first attempt to write. I participated in the WSA by coincidence, I didn't have any idea about the length of chapters. I just had a story in my head and all I wanted was to write it down the way I imagined it. I admit that my English wasn't that great, but the story is good. I hope I can read another review from you about it. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Now i feel bad for writing that :(. Sorry i really thought that u where one of those authors thats just delete's the comments and i dont like those kinds of people but since u took time out of your day to reply I can see that that is not so. I can also understand the hardship of learning a different language since english is my 3rd one and the only reason why i emphasized the grammer is because i thought u where one of those poeple who translated work off of a website and posted it here since like 40% of novels on webnovel are like that.
Dream_catch:Hi Deaboro, Thank you for your review. I appreciate it, and I won't delete it or any other reviews that critique my work. I learned English on my own, and the Sealed Power was my first attempt to write. I participated in the WSA by coincidence, I didn't have any idea about the length of chapters. I just had a story in my head and all I wanted was to write it down the way I imagined it. I admit that my English wasn't that great, but the story is good. I hope I can read another review from you about it. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Also could you tell me if the grammer gets better becouse now I want to read it mor and give abother review. Since the concept is interesting but it was kinda hard to read.
Dream_catch:Hi Deaboro, Thank you for your review. I appreciate it, and I won't delete it or any other reviews that critique my work. I learned English on my own, and the Sealed Power was my first attempt to write. I participated in the WSA by coincidence, I didn't have any idea about the length of chapters. I just had a story in my head and all I wanted was to write it down the way I imagined it. I admit that my English wasn't that great, but the story is good. I hope I can read another review from you about it. [img=recommend][img=recommend]