Review Detail of greyknight in POISON GENIUS PRINCESS

Hello author from a fellow newbie author! I have been writing my own first novel and thought to give some support to any person also starting on their writing journey here. The beginning chapters of your story definitely caught my attention enough for me to look forward to the subsequent chapters :) The format of your story is pretty unique, and it reminded me of acting scripts. I am not sure if other readers will be comfortable reading in this format, but if you wanted it to be that way, so shall it be! If you could describe the the characters' expressions sometimes when they speak and describe more of their appearance, perhaps it could enhance your story more. I wish you well in your writing journey 😊