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caichiiLv13yr
2021-08-08 22:27

reading the synopsis, I already knew that the plot would be something really heart touching. this story could relate to many people out there, teens alike who would do anything just to be appreciated. I myself is one. overall, this is an amazing book. beautifully written too! I love your writing style. keep up the good job!

Bittersweet Life

ElJaneDM
4.9
236 Chs

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ElJaneDM
ElJaneDMAuthor

thank you so much for your review! I am really happy.. You encouraged me a lot 😊

3yr
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Junever_Daylo
Junever_DayloLv1

What an exciting chapters! It is so intense. I really love it! This story is worthwhile.. I hope you keep updating it and don't lose the spice of every chapters.. Goodluck..

3yr

Dankie123
Dankie123Lv12

cool beans dude...............👋🤚🖐✋🖖👌👌🤌🤏✌🤞🤟🤘🤙👉👈👆👉☝👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏻👍🏻👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

3yr
Braiden_Hawkins_5082
Braiden_Hawkins_5082Lv4

It amazing im not kidding about it i’m normally not a big fan of these types of books but this book is perfect all I needs now is the rest of The chapter of the book

3yr
JJ_Prakoso
JJ_PrakosoLv1

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3yr
Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

The author has a great knack for details and narration. A big plus too at the plot and the character dialogues and interactions. The characters were very realistic and act life-like. This got potential I must say and the author will improve more in the future. I am not the best reviewer but I tried to point out things that may help the author. And I hope that It did help 🙏 You got my support! 👍

2yr
Karan_Mewada
Karan_MewadaLv3

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3yr
Bad_Totodile
Bad_TotodileLv3

It's actually very complicated and sweet, the story seems real and has a life. The writing is also good and clean, so easy to understand. I hope the author never lose hope in writing and in life. keep on fighting/writing. Gambaree

3yr
Draejon
DraejonLv11

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3yr
Madyan_wani
Madyan_waniLv10

The synopsisis quite intriguing..for one moment i felt it...idk how ..The author depicts the scenario the best way as it si. I love the characters, background and the story development. Hope it continues further..Good luck to author!!! Fighting

3yr
rzasrsna
rzasrsnaLv2

This is intriguing and satisfying to read! I got hooked by the chapter one! Pity for trish I hope she will be fine and nothing worse will happen! and I hope tristan will play his part and to not disappoint people around him special his sister!.😸 after all this novel is promising and I coudn't wait to read the other chapters. keep it up and goodluck to your journey as an author.😻

3yr
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