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Review Detail of Ochoa in Chaos' Heir

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Ochoa
OchoaLv131yrOchoa

I really liked the story, but the story took a weird forced turn in order to separate Khan and Liiza. I feel that he should have stayed loyal, and it would have been better to have them both stay loyal. Then they would revisit their relationship in the future. Instead he moves onto women very quickly and it destroys what I thought of the story. Up until then I really enjoyed the story and it became one of my favorites, of the stories I am currently reading. However, I have now dropped it due to what I feel to be forced actions and bad character/story progression.

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Chaos' Heir

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Hezii_2G
Hezii_2GLv15Hezii_2G

Thx for the heads up I just got to the separation and was really worried about that. Its unfortunate because I really liked the story till then

Cant_read_lips
Cant_read_lipsLv13Cant_read_lips

Same I loved the relationship they had and when he just forced them to leave and moved on I just dropped the novel