Review Detail of KiaoSuvan in The Dream Saga

Overall the story concept is interesting but personally i find the language use in the work to be strange and i notice many typo, mistake and some grammar error otherwise everything else is great. the writing is understandable but require a lot of focus and re reading which distract the reader from the good part of the writing. I think the story have potential as i can see the intention behind every word. it just need to be more carefully construct so reader have easier time reading. I hope you are not discourage by my comment and keep on improving yourself.