Review Detail of Epyonnn in The Dream Saga

Decent stuff. This is a bit of a pet peeve of mine, but there were a bunch of grammar mistakes. I suggest using some sort of grammar-checking software such as Grammarly. The concept for the plot is quite interesting, in that the main character can see into the future with his dreams. I can definitely get behind this, but the main character himself wasn't developed very much in the beginning. No offense, but if you have to input exposition in the Author's Note, then I feel that you failed in presenting enough information within the chapters themselves. It's the classic "show don't tell" mantra. Still, I feel that the plot progresses in a natural function, and there is a lot of room to write a compelling story. Keep up the good work!