Review Detail of kuhaku_sora in The Dream Saga

The story is very engaging and entertaining! I really love the concept of a character switching between worlds. There are only two things that I could suggest. One is the grammar, which can always be learned and fixed through editting. The second one is the lack of showing, I know that the first few parts were described, but it would be better if there is a more in depth explanation about the background (for an example the scenary, what he sees and what he feels. There are some parts that the chapters did this pretty well, but it would be more marvellous if done always. Nevertheless, kudos for the author~ [img=recommend]