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I'll be honest dood reading this was so troublesome like it took me so much effort to get through so little chapters. switching back and forth wasnt interesting it was annoying like practice with single point of view before u try multiple views. so many characters i dont care about and I dont even have time to care about the first 4. And the first 4 arent even strong they get scared and get they ass kicked in the first 10 chapters why do they even act unruly its embarrassing. u telling me the soldiers didnt have types? are types even rare? what kind of shitty school is this? So yea concept was interesting the type categories also interesting but these kids are robots with no reason to live and the school element was dropped in 5 chapters. I thought king would be interesting but he breaks the fourth wall for no reason and has no reason to be called king I guess it was a cringy nickname his brothers thought of. You might not care about my opinion but yea the story could of been better and I probably wont come back.

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Not My Type!

Dio_Lyracist333

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Dio_Lyracist333AuthorDio_Lyracist333

I shall take all this into consideration and I thank you for the honest feedback. I'm just happy someone Even bothered to read this. I'll try harder to make it better as the chapters go on! PS about the King thing I honestly don't know myself. I just like the name😋

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lol