Review Detail of Support_Writer in Reincarnated In Dxd With Denial Of Nothingness

Idea is great and I love how the Mc isn't like others and can actually think. Now here's why I give it a low rating At first he really wants to go back to his OG world but after his first failure he gives up and never tries again (yes I know he gets attached to his family later on but during this time frame he didn't really care about them as much and I understand later on he contemplates about which family should he stay with). The Mc is pretty lazy and doesn't want any problems (which I can understand) however many problems he can fix are extremely easy and won't take long ( an example of this is that he received a female uniform instead of a male uniform and instead of using his OP magic to change it to the male uniform (he can even summon it out of thin air) or trying to contact the school for a male uniform he just wears the female uniform for 'plot') The Mc does many things that will be extremely detrimental to his goal of being lazy and not wanting any problems and while sometimes he thinks 'hey why did I do that thing it's detrimental to my goal' he then brushes that thought away and still does things that are detrimental. Sometimes when questioned about this the author just says 'plot' and I understand that but he does this many times and i personally hate reading that multiple times (an example of this is when (lord) kazuma was sad that his girlfriend broke up with him (they were in kindergarten/1st grade when they started dating and it seemed that when they were in different schools the girl got a new boyfriend in middle school) the Mc gave Kazuma a stand from Jojo (gave him killer queen) and told him magic was real. The reason why 'plot' (he did think about why he did it but he brushed the thought away)) The writing itself somewhat improves the more you get into it but I won't put much blame on the author for this (author said English was his third language and if that's true that's amazing and I want to know what other languages you can speak) Overall I quite dislike the novel however you may enjoy it and I would encourage you to read this if you want. One last thing I personally feel like the Mc lost his purpose. At the beginning of this he wanted to go back to his world but after that failed he seemed to want to live a normal life with no problems but he constantly goes against that. So if possible give him a purpose. To the author: The writing is readable but I would say to think more about the plot if you would do a new ff also make sure you're Mc has a purpose