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sholo_bolo
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2023-02-02 10:26

A pretty good story with good writing quality and the setting is also interesting. There is a system BUT thankfully there are no leveling up and exp things. it just shows him his stats and explains about them, that's it. The major turn off for most people would be that the book is mostly in first person, so some people might not like it. There are also some 4th wall breaks in MCs monologues due to this being from the first person POV. Though not too annoying for me, preceed with caution if this ruins a book for u. The MCs personality is like Rimuru from that time I got reincarnated as a slime(the setting is pertty similar here) but he's more realistic and less optimistic about everything, and he's also brutal with his fights, actually embodying a dragon and not just a human stuck on a dragon's body. It's just at the right place, not too kind and optimitic but not too edgy and dark. He is not too smart, but not to the point of idiotic MCs, tbh it just depends on your own perspective of if you find his decisions smart or stupid. In conclution, it's a good book. Not a trendsetting masterpiece but a good one to read and have a pleasant time. Also there are a few minor typos here and there, not too bad tho. Enjoy if this is to your taste

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PancakesWitch
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thanks for the honest review! In which chapter are you at the moment?

sholo_bolo
sholo_boloLv4

65 at the moment, but......I'm not really enjoying the interaction between MC and FL at the moment. Just too much goodness and lovey dovey-ness for my taste but I'll soldier on

PancakesWitch:thanks for the honest review! In which chapter are you at the moment?
Jaswanth_1566
Jaswanth_1566Lv2

hello, author can I get the discord link, please send me the discord link

PancakesWitch:thanks for the honest review! In which chapter are you at the moment?
Slc4free
Slc4freeLv15

Should take of the harem tag since he only has 2 wives until chapter 1300-1500 is when he gets his third waifu and if he only has 3 it not really a harem

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