Review Detail of Man_of_culture in A new life (Highschool Dxd x Naruto) ( Itachi Uchiha )
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Bro, I am having a stroke reading this... First, where are the quotation marks???? How can someone even write direct conversations without quotation marks? Second, the grammar is just plain bad. Third, the punctuation is just non-existing. Oh and have I mentioned the spacing? There is a space between every word, comma, and dot...
A new life (Highschool Dxd x Naruto) ( Itachi Uchiha )
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ILoveChaosLv3ILoveChaos
Lukas_Blast:No need to read then... I have others people who are enjoying it, the fact that you don't like it... I don't know, whatever...
Man_of_cultureLv4Man_of_culture
Instead of taking the criticism and improving your novel, you just out right ignore it? Wow, what a good author you are xD
Lukas_Blast:No need to read then... I have others people who are enjoying it, the fact that you don't like it... I don't know, whatever...
Lukas_BlastAuthorLukas_Blast
ILoveChaos:So instead of improving yourself, you're just asking him to leave?image
Lukas_BlastAuthorLukas_Blast
Man_of_culture:Instead of taking the criticism and improving your novel, you just out right ignore it? Wow, what a good author you are xD
H01Y_CR1NGLv2H01Y_CR1NG
it does get pretty difficult to read especially mid conversation, if your to lazy to fix your grammar get a beta or use grammarly or something similar it'll improve your quality 300%
Lukas_Blast:No need to read then... I have others people who are enjoying it, the fact that you don't like it... I don't know, whatever...