Great story, waiting for more chapter, has a lot of potential, and whoever comes here first before reading this great story you are wasting you time, just go, go and read this wonderful story by Gideon.

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Heya, I'm this book's author. Because I'm a new writer, I have almost no experience on writing novel before. I'd like to know if there's a room for improvement for me. PS: I haven't do another round of editing on older version. I planned to do it once it's done.

After reading the first few chapters, I can tell the story has potential. But you tend to make the lines too long. Okay, it's not a problem when the sentence is free from grammatical mistakes. But when the line is long and there are grammatical errors, it makes the sense of the line hard to understand. So, it would be great if you proofread the story. However, good work overall!

I really love your story’s plot and pacing. I’m surprised that this is your first novel; it’s so well paced! In terms of writing quality, there’s some life-changing advice I’d like to give you in order to elevate it: never use the same word twice within a sentence. That’s it. For example, a sentence that goes: He felt his lungs imploding as if they would collapse within him. VS He felt his lungs imploding as if his lungs would collapse within him. In my opinion, the first alternative sounds better because it there’s a freshness to it versus the second, more repetitive one, chiming one. This is just my opinion, of course! Again, I truly enjoyed reading this so a hearty 5/5 to you, my friend! ✨

The cyberpunk type of world is there. The author has a lot of imagination and immersion. Over all, it will be interesting to see where the plot line goes. Enjoy the ‘platoon’ combat command type of writing. Keep up the good work!

Good starting of the story, new approach and new theme for me, War, Future Do the best author, I am looking forward to it.

Very interesting, the autor is setting the stage for a nice story. It seems like a complex world, I am looking forward to reading what will become of Seth.

This is just awesome and I loved how you gave this a variety of perspective of view. Seth's story is amazing so far. This book has a very good potential and I hope the author doesn't stop writing. Dropping this now will be equal to death 😂. SO AUTHOR KEEP ON WRITING AND DON'T STOP!!!