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Wittyvenus
WittyvenusLv143yr
2021-11-23 01:37

though it OK at the beginning, it soon became redundant. internet water army trolling at every stupid single event in Lu family's members is really vexing. It really kills the story building and character development. A really sincere suggestion to the author if this is still an ongoing original novel or an ongoing Chinese raw novel, please concentrate on character development and story building. Give more conversations between live people rather than face slapping the internet trolls. Once in a while is fine but your story has this in almost every other chapter which makes me want to skip the chapter or drop the novel. I am a tenacious reader and would like to keep going through your book. So, please consider my suggestion. Thanks for the hard work, Author!!

Transmigration: I Became The Daughter of a Family of Villains

Zhou Zhou An
4.5
456 Chs

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