Review Detail of hansora in The Bloody Angel

Item: The Bloody Angel
Rating: 4.8

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hansoraLv132yrhansora

The idea of a ruthless princess is good. I think you should focus more on how you write and the way you plot the story. Try to read the books that you found comfortable and interesting then learn from how the authors wrote their books. Those are what I've always done to improve my writing. It takes time but practice makes perfect!

The Bloody Angel

listen_moon

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listen_moonAuthorlisten_moon

Thanks for your precious comment and time. I'll improve surely.

2yr

hansoraLv13hansora

Don't feel rush, because learning is a long time process 😉 every one starts from zero. As long as you don't give up, you'd see the fruits of your efforts

listen_moon:Thanks for your precious comment and time. I'll improve surely.
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2yr

listen_moonAuthorlisten_moon

Ah, surely it is my first work so I was so excited that I messed up a few dialogues.But will learn.

2yr