Review Detail of Allan_FireHunter in RAINING JACKET

The starting sub section of the first chapter grabs you by your collar and never lets it go. The intriguing character of Prof. Mathew is amazingly established but I think is a bit underwritten. I love the dialogues, almost feels like a movie but it sometimes feels theatrical. The student characters are also likable and their banter also adds to the fun of the first chapter. You can immediately imagine as these thin fat duos in college. Again, ending the sub section with a cliff hanger. The policemen are amicable but their characters are very distinctly defined and very beautifully done. This world is a mix of reality and sci fi, which immediately reminds of the genius Kaufman movies. The starting chapter is quite interesting but in my opinion, some rewriting is required. Other than that, seeing the author's other work as well(which is also great), I am really intrigued about the further proceedings of the web novel!!