I really liked the writing in this novel. I personally liked the character of Eli and how well you have shown her innocence in the conversations she ha with the great one. Talking of conversations, the dialogues in this novel are really well written and I really enjoyed reading them! I think this has the potential to be anyone's favorite novel and I am looking forward to the upcoming chapters. And keep up the good work!
RandomPotato
Liked by 1 people
LIKE