Review Detail of Gian_Carpio in A Demon's Journey

Lacking in substance and enough magic to capture the audience enough for me to read further. The quality of this novel is passable if you are looking to waste time but has no further accomplishments for it to be rememberable. Makes fatal mistakes an author shouldn’t do in progression fantasy causing the world in the MC to lose the magic a novel like this should have. 1# Lists all the ranks in the first chapter. The sense of mystery and accomplishment is gone. Now the ranks are simply an arythmetic a random person wrote in an order of 1-10. Doesn’t feel real, doesn’t feel plausible and doesn’t make me believe, therefore I don’t care. #2 Skips four ranks in the first five chapters. Makes the readers believe that reaching these ranks are nothing special. Doesn’t further elaborate on the differences and the scale this ranks mean on a world like this. Botches the world building, botches the readers immersion, and further distances the readers from their wallets to give this guy golden tickets. #3 Boring cultivation technique that offers no explanations whatsoever. Along with a brand new physique that doesn’t match up with the cultivation technique. Also doesn’t explain well how the cultivation techniques and the martial/ spells work under the new circumstances. #4 Author doesn’t establish the roots of his skills, doesn’t describe the said skills well. For example, his skill Phantom Steps - we’ve heard of it before and the author thinks that is sufficient for the reader and describes no further than the name. Adding a lore for it or what it does would be helpful but no. This also further ruins the mediocre story by adding an infinite number of skills where mc has no specialization. One second he’s a grandmaster alchemist, one second he’s a grandmaster array expert. Along with his infinite number of demon duties. Further maximizing the lack of interest with mc’s abilities since it could be whatever the author is feeling that day. #5 World building jumps too fast. LOTM has long boring world building but that makes it so that the story is solid and we follow along the next 100 chapters. This is like jumping through a different world and already planning out schemes and war to read the readers confused and lost on the first 10 chapters.