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So..... The story started out great and unique but later on it was more like Shirou (MC) started to use the lines of Hajime. The reason for such low rating is that updates are not regular and the fact that while Sakura and Shinji are mentioned, they didn't get proper development in pre-tortus period. Overall, I can say the premise was good but execution was average. Still, a decent read. So, keep up the good work author.

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Tracing in Another World

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Thanks, I will try to improve