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FewthousandcutsLv23yr
2021-07-07 05:56

Ok so here is an honest opinion. The story beginning is not the best out there it felt too shallow and I thought a lot about dropping it. But the more I read the more it made sense. Still the writing quality is questionable, it is probably as the author said, it was his first time. Back to the story, it is one of the common cultivation stories nothing new there. However it involves proving the concept of using the spirit force or "energy" in this book by physics so that it does give it its realism. So far up to chapter 49, the story is turning out to something I eagerly anticipate as I can't speculate on what is going to happen next. To conclude, I'd say give this story a chance it is definitely full of surprises rather than the same settings to the same genre everyone reads

Mysteries of the 4th Dimension

om1st0
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Hello guys, Author here. People may think it is some kind of a read-on-the-go novel with no thought put into it, but that is not the case. I thought about it for quite some time, and you may think that there are many loopholes, however, the answer will be given in later chapters. So support me by voting and adding to the library, it encourages me to write more. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

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I recommend this book because it's unique the quality of the store is amazing and the characters design and the updating stability and the world is amazing

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Writing quality isn't that bad. The story is truly interesting and unique. Give the novel a try...............................................

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I like the overall idea, I forget about everything around just by start reading this novel. Too many creativity and amazing story building. I advice everyone to read it, it deservs the time ❤️

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amongthrstarsLv2

Story so far has a new concept, though I still don't know how's it gonna be, I'm thrilled to know what's gonna happen next. Characters are extremely adorable, but if the MC is still going to be a coward i Am out. Writing's amazing to be honest which is why it gets the 5 stars from me.

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Amazingggg and veryy interesting looking forward to read more writings keepp goingggg ;) counttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

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mooskateer
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Amazing story. I've always wondered why's no one writing about ancient egypt even though their mythology and level of astronomy was too advanced bqck then. Until i found this and now i wanna see how it ends more than ever.

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Nehal_Khaled
Nehal_KhaledLv1

Smooth going story and writing. Good story so far great Character concepts, and a really interesting MC. Great change of pace From the usual Novels.

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mooskateer
mooskateerLv3

sigh I wonder when these hidden gems would shine . hope to see it shine soon. first few chapters may be just a little broing to some but trust me its just gonna get waaaay better

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Liked it, I liked the characters, the writing is really nice, the plot is very exciting, it’s unique and original. can’t wait for the next chapter ❤️❤️❤️

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