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Kat_Porsche
Kat_PorscheLv41yr
2023-09-22 22:31

I’m sorry, I cannot keep reading the story when the names are not consistent, sometimes the same person is called an asian name and sometimes something like felix, it’s really annoying, I don’t mind grammatical errors but this is really stopping me from enjoying the story. Besides that I cannot relate to the character development, his revenge-feeling is getting annoying throughout the story. Nevertheless the romantic and hot parts are really nice.

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Zhee_Aliyu
4.6
306 Chs

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26stars
26starsLv12

I'm not a fan of books with first-person POV, but this book's summary is quite intriguing so decided to read it 😬 The storyline is interesting, it's a bit mysterious and seems dangerous. The dialogues are also enjoyable. The author did a good job [img=recommend]

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GayParadise
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I really like this book. it's a bit different from what I usually read but I guess that's what makes it unique. The characters are quite funny too. Author did a good job. I just hope updates are more consistent.

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VinithaKomsi_29
VinithaKomsi_29Lv4

oh I am in love with this book, really looking forward for upcoming chapters, so many twists and turns..✌✌😍😍[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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BotBrain
BotBrainLv11

BIGGEST ISSUE: The ENTIRE romantic conflict of the novel can be resolved by like chapter 10 if the MC just offers one sentence of explanation but instead he says everything but that and it’s infuriating as F. Outside of that: The novel is a bit cringe with its kind of random use of JP words & the overly edgy MC but the writing is otherwise superb IMO. The characters are interesting and I genuinely root for the romance and understand why the MC falls for the ML but the ML doesn’t rly have a reason to like the MC or at least his motives aren’t clear yet (c50). Everything 5/5 besides story which is 3/5 for aforementioned reasons.

3yr
Melite
MeliteLv15

I started this as one of the "read recommendations for 20 min" ... by the time I realized I was past 20 min, it was chapter 50, and I was hooked. Other than the occasional name changes, which stopped bothering me, I love this book. It's intense, it's well written, and the story and character development are great. I am officially addicted to a book I didn't intend to read past 20 min.

1yr
Tarliiii
TarliiiiLv1

I love this book I know I'm pretty late but, this book was not what I was expecting and I just couldnt pull away, next thing I know I'm on chapter 80 so really good read.

2yr
FlyingDutchgirl
FlyingDutchgirlLv1

storyline looks very intriguing but execution is a fail writing style and quality can still improve, world background is fine GO ON! KEEP ON WRITING

3yr
Sri_Shmaytha_Shmay
Sri_Shmaytha_ShmayLv14

superb story that can make you stay but the updates are slow

1mth
JNN
JNNLv3

Words can't describe how amazing this book is, it's a shame I've discovered it after three years. The author really did a grt job I fell in love with all the characters and Aito's emotions were described to perfection👌👌👌

2mth
DaoistiyintD
DaoistiyintDLv4

Love it!!! very interesting 🌹🌹🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗💕💕💐💐💐💐💐💐

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