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2023-09-22 22:31

I’m sorry, I cannot keep reading the story when the names are not consistent, sometimes the same person is called an asian name and sometimes something like felix, it’s really annoying, I don’t mind grammatical errors but this is really stopping me from enjoying the story. Besides that I cannot relate to the character development, his revenge-feeling is getting annoying throughout the story. Nevertheless the romantic and hot parts are really nice.

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