Review Detail of VRW1 in The bet

I like the way that the character is reacting to the situation and they all trying to bet for something that will get them into trouble and mess up their lies and it would be good to see people have more high stakes. I just hope that they don't hurt each other by just making a bet but the way they going. It seems that way but I just that to read more to find out. Keep it up, author. It's something good for your first English novel but there are mistakes but very few. So it didn't throw me off.