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so far super intresting and i dont see any grammar errors prob cuz english isnt my main language nice new way of crossover super intresting i have high expectations for this

So far it's pretty interesting and I'm enjoying it, there are some typing mistakes but it isn't really noticeable and they can be easily ignored. I'd say it's a pretty interesting concept. Hope author doesn't give up on this fanfic, and continues writing. I think it could turn out really good in the future. The author might already be doing this but I will say it anyways, if you aren't sure about how some words are spelt its always fine to google it. All in all has a lot of potential and is a really nice read.

This is a first for me to see the MC as Albedo and still being in the game. It is really interesting since it's also Yuri which is a plus~ Man since Albedo will basically left in charge after all of them left. It will be very interesting to see without Momonga being there. Even if just imagining the MC tsukkomi at Momonga or when the MC comments about things that happened in the game. Also Momonga learning that the MC is basically aware since the day she was created will be very amusing. Sad that I can't get to see his reaction. Though how are you going to explain Momonga not there being in the end since as far as I know he is one loyal dude and being Guildmaster kinda compels him to stay. I guess I'll just look forward to how the MC going to handle being the leader of that guild If the members all quits since technically being Overseer it is kinda her job to handle them when the members are not there.

Well-crafted fanfiction, but the author so far has hammered in writing new chapters. I can't wait for the author to write a new chapter.I hope he still writes ...

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This is very well written. I’m honestly surprised English isn’t your first language. The premise is also something I haven’t seen before so I’m looking forward to reading more.

noice .

I would like to admit i've read this when it was at the bottom of the fanfic books and I am very suprised. The fights aren't long enough but i can understand that, Whats bugging me is that Albedo ( before reincarnation ) is kind of lacking for me. But other than that Its very good

VERY GOOD