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Khetan_Saini
Khetan_SainiLv13yr
2021-09-24 22:40

So there aren't that much chapter yet but What I read it is amazing! I really love the plotline and hope that it continuous the in upcoming chapter . It's definitely worth reading.

Legacy of the Dark Sage

Lessyr
4.2
1261 Chs

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Lessyr
LessyrAuthor

thank you for reviewing ☺️ I'm glad you like the story 😁

3yr
the_Harlequin
the_HarlequinLv12

For how much will the Mc act weak? I did not yet start reading the novel just looked up the tags.

Lessyr:thank you for reviewing ☺️ I'm glad you like the story 😁
3yr
NoShot
NoShotLv12

Tbh honest this guy is trolling you mr. author. This guy has 3 reviews and they are all 3stars, so he is downgrading your novel a little bit, unless you asked him to do it to get some credibility, but I doubt that

Lessyr:thank you for reviewing ☺️ I'm glad you like the story 😁
2yr
Deaboro
DeaboroLv12

did you read the story? if you did could you answer your question pls XD

the_Harlequin:For how much will the Mc act weak? I did not yet start reading the novel just looked up the tags.
2yr
the_Harlequin
the_HarlequinLv12

if u read my comment u would have AN answer to ur question

Deaboro:did you read the story? if you did could you answer your question pls XD
2yr
Deaboro
DeaboroLv12

and If you read my comment you would have k own that I asked you to answer only if you read it already it has been over 6 month si ce your post a pretty high chance that you did...

the_Harlequin:if u read my comment u would have AN answer to ur question
2yr
the_Harlequin
the_HarlequinLv12

nope took a break from this app. yesterday was the first day in more than 6 months

Deaboro:and If you read my comment you would have k own that I asked you to answer only if you read it already it has been over 6 month si ce your post a pretty high chance that you did...
2yr
Deaboro
DeaboroLv12

wish I could do that I am addicted only reason why I am not on it 24/7 is cose when I finished something good I can't find anything good to read

the_Harlequin:nope took a break from this app. yesterday was the first day in more than 6 months
2yr
Other Reviews
CriticalReader
CriticalReaderLv2

Lots cringe moments ruins the novel for me The protagonist spends most of the chapters pretending to be cool but comes of like an edgelord His companion praises him for doing ordinary and unremarkable things (I cringed every time) However the writing is decent except for poor sentence structure (too much rambling and repetition) Worldbuilding is shallow... what with the info dumps in a constant attempt to compensate Plot is there and it is consistent for the most part but relies on the idiot ball tactic at times Worst is the tone of the novel... almost all characters showcase snark and tantrums, dialogues sound immature and the tension is all but none existent... so it is no word i feel cringe almost every chapter Overall well written but misguided... If only there wasn't such a blatant attempt at making everything look cool because often the result is the opposite

2yr

Frostee_Flamey17
Frostee_Flamey17Lv4

Hello Author! You did a good job on making a novel. I checked your profile and I was surprised to see that you are a girl. The way you wrote your story is better than most "boy authors" in this platform. I am going to give you my whole support (Power stones of my different accounts) since it was quite eccentric to know that a girl made this amazing novel (I am not discriminating women as a whole but I expected that women are quite proficient in making romantic novels ) Thank you

2yr
Edward_Ray_Ringdom
Edward_Ray_RingdomLv1

HI here，Your novel is intriguing，I like it a lot. when will you update next time？[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
GrassHopperSensei
GrassHopperSenseiLv1

There is no depth and there are many cringe moments within the story. Does not grab my attention, very poor made

2yr
Thee_AngryBird
Thee_AngryBirdLv5

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Suprava_Bai
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Youssef_Wael_7515
Youssef_Wael_7515Lv13

It ’s been 30 to 50 chapters that the Mc staying in the same tower waiting for the meeting to plan their next step it’s becoming boring

2yr
khetan_saini
khetan_sainiLv1

So there aren't that much chapter yet but What I read it is amazing! I really love the plotline and hope that it continuous the in upcoming chapter . It's definitely worth reading.

3yr
Nezyrin
NezyrinLv10

I have not much to say about the story yet, except that I love the slow but detailed flow in every chapter. Looking forward to knowing more about the characters in the story, as well as their world! Keep it up!!! :D

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